Sunday, July 25, 2010

Reworked, yet again...

Input welcomed on my reworked P&P statements. I don't think what I had before was
going anywhere:

Problem:

The products currently available for connecting an electric guitar to a computer suffer from a perception of poor product quality.

Purpose:

The purpose of this study was to identify the top five (5) points of customer dissatisfaction, enabling manufacturers to prioritize actions taken; addressing the issues that have the greatest impact on their product’s perceived quality first.

This seems more like a research project.

Cheers.

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